on 2015-07-13 12:55 am (UTC)
I’m with [livejournal.com profile] swan_secrets, I would have liked to read more! I like the way you managed to capture Natasha’s flirtatious side; far too many writers fail to capture her sense of humor. I also like how you incorporate some of Sharon’s backstory into the plot; I feel like I needed that in order to connect with her a bit (since we didn’t learn a whole lot about her in CA:TWS).
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